Thread:Faenor of the Silver Laurel/@comment-26210095-20170125002002/@comment-26210095-20170129011145

I'll take a look.

That wouldn't go amiss. Perhaps make the scope of the story (not the world) smaller, yet note that there are unexplored/uncharted lands that will not be covered in detail.

The World's story? If you mean by the story you are writing about the world, then I do not know because you haven't told me what it's about.

Interesting. I seem to think you really enjoy making characters (at least in the Magus Archives) with very destructive capabilities. And I believe you have left out Lux Sakura's Plague-art.