Thread:Faenor of the Silver Laurel/@comment-26210095-20170125002002/@comment-26444332-20170129012755

I may do that.

No, I meant the story in general. Perhaps there ought to be less complexity in the races and backstory: perhaps removing a dimension or two might alleviate it. If I find it difficult to keep everything in one place, and I created 95% of it, it speaks volumes about how others must feel.

I do enjoy making extremely destructive characters, true. And I haven't left out Lux's plague-art: while his is extremely destructive, true, he can't "rip the world apart" in the same way the other three can. And perhaps I should clarify: Alister had the potential to destroy the world. His Noble Art isn't quite powerful enough yet.