Board Thread:Fan Fiction/@comment-26295802-20160614010310/@comment-26295802-20160614165336

The Lord of Minas Morgul wrote: Numerical error: One down, nine to go. It should be one down, eight to go.

How is Baranor the first Nazgûl? He obviously isn't the Witch-king, the most powerful of them all, and their leader. Nor is he Khamûl...

To be fairly honest, I like the concept of the story, along with the story itself, but I feel like it gets choppy at times. It doesn't flow very well, especially towards the end. I forget, what is the lore for The Witch King? Obviously he ruled Angmar, but maybe he got recruited somewhere else and was moved there by Sauron. Besides, just because he's the first nazgul that doesn't mean he's the most powerful/leader.