Board Thread:Custom Lore Development/@comment-26535281-20160827230131/@comment-26184570-20160830003415

You should really work on seperating writing systems from the spoken language. Also, the Sarati part would be unique from regular Sarati because it would be written with the same Chinese style caligraphy brushes as the Logrograms, would be phonologically addapted to Mandarin Chinese (because that's what you're using for the Xin) and it would have extra marks to indicate tone (all of which I can help you with). Even if you don't go with what I suggest, you should really use a mix of Logograms and an Abugida.