Board Thread:Fan Fiction/@comment-26295802-20160614010310/@comment-26453572-20160614021703

Numerical error: One down, nine to go. It should be one down, eight to go.

How is Baranor the first Nazgûl? He obviously isn't the Witch-king, the most powerful of them all, and their leader. Nor is he Khamûl...

To be fairly honest, I like the concept of the story, along with the story itself, but I feel like it gets choppy at times. It doesn't flow very well, especially towards the end.