Board Thread:Fan Fiction Board./@comment-26184570-20151011142347

Banayat thought to himself: "Malakas is rich, beautiful and it resisted the will of the demon foreigner. But I want to see the world! I always thought when I was little that I would be able to travel for my entire life becuase I had no ties, because I never knew my parents, but, look at me know. I am sixteen and I have never been out of this kingdom. Well, that's the life of a street kid."

This was a very common thought Banayat had, and each time it just made him feel more and more hopeless. He wanted to meet those strangers who live in the forests of the north, he wanted trade with the rumored bearded people in their mountains of blood! He wanted to get chased by an angry hoard of the people who tried to bring that demon here, and failed. What was their name? ahhh yes! The Khandians.

He heard that there was an entire world beyond the stone pagodas and jungles of Malakas, and he wasn't seeing it! What was lucky for him, however, is that this was his first day after rode his newly "purchased" water bufallo, Kacak to the capitol, Dakilang Lungsod. It was a booming trade center. It had a monopoly and the control of everything from the beautiful silks of the north to the strange wooden objects from the rumored mangrove people, on the other side of the sea, way to the west and slighly south. He would for sure find a foreigner, and maybe, if they were nice enough, he could hitch a ride. Well, one day, he heard something that maybe, just maybe could mean that his wish will come true. First it was an enchanting, high pitched horn, and then someone saying in his native tounge: "Make way for traders of Rivendell!"

So yeah, that was the prologue! Please tell me what you think! 