Thread:Argali1/@comment-26210095-20151221162852

I just came up with a super tragic character. I want to know what you think.

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\f0\fs28 \cf2 \cb3 \expnd0\expndtw0\kerning0 \outl0\strokewidth0 \strokec2 Name: Adrahil of Dol Amroth\ \ Race: 15/16 Numenorean, 1/16 Galadhrim\ \ Gender: Male\ \ Homeland: Born in Dol Amroth, currently wandering Eriador.\ \ Age: 87 Chronologicaly, 29 Biologicaly\ \ History: Was once a Prince of Dol Amroth (he was distantly related to the royal house), and earned his spurs as a Swan Knight, eventually becoming part of the Order of the Swan, a group of elite knights. He fell in love with a maiden of Dol Amroth. She was of a minor noble house, but another man, known as Anardil, a good friend of Adrahil, desired her. Although the maiden, Aerluin was her name, loved Adrahil, Anardil remained steadfast. Although Adrahil and Anardil started out as friends, their friendship soon turned sour. In a fit of drunken madness, he kidnapped Aerluin and took her to his castle. Adrahil, using his Ranger of Nimrodel skills, tracked them down to his tower. When he saw that Anardil had once been his friend had taken his beloved, he went into a for of violent rage. He slew the guards singlehandedly, and fought his way into the tower, wantonly killing his men and soldiers. When he reached the top of the tower, he saw Aerluin and Anardil. He fought with Anardil. He could not withstand his prowess with a blade, and Adrahil slashed his leg and he fell. Before he could die, however, he took up Adrahil's knife that he dropped during the battle and stabbed Aerluin in the heart, killing her. She died in Adrahil's arms. Soon after, the Gondorian officials found this scene and thought that Adrahil had murdered Anardil and Aerluin. Although this claim was false, the evidence was too damning against him. He was about to be sent to a prison, but he escaped, and ran off into the wilderness. \ \ How They Got to Rivendell: A good friend of the Elves of Rivendell, they let him pass. \ \ Weapon: His swan-knight blade, a relic of Westernesse. It is of elvish design, but with Numenorean influence. It is made similarly to Damascus steel. It's name is Serceret. He carries a bow of Lebenthron, and knives. \ \ Skills: Excellent swordsman, good archer. He is unsurpassed with a blade. He has all the skills of a ranger. \ \ \ His friends will be introduced later.\ \ }

What do you think? 