Thread:Faenor of the Silver Laurel/@comment-26295802-20170105001219/@comment-26444332-20170105004748

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Before: Voyagers are large and versatile ships, usually used for long travels and exploration. They are large enough that they don't need an escort, but small enough that they can go up to 5 years without needing to stop for supplies.

After: The Voyager-type starships employed by the Knights Templar are large cargo, transport, and exploration vessels designed by William Kentis. While they are large enough to fend off raiders and other enemies without the need for an escort or support craft, their crew size is small enough, and their fuel usage efficient enough, to allow them to go for several years without need to stop for supplies.

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