User blog comment:High Prince Imrahil/Never Forget/@comment-46.23.66.106-20170708022310/@comment-46.23.66.106-20170710000724

i noticed. it's hard to write a truly sad story that doesn't seem melodramatic without lots of buildup and character development in my opinion. for a short story with not much buildup it's pretty good, but still obviously from someone who's not used to it.

fuck off, i'm trying to give genuine feedback.