Board Thread:Middle Earth Roleplay Board/@comment-26210095-20151111125728/@comment-26444332-20151112003232

(While the magic is overpowered, this is what happens after expending that much power...)

Faenor falls on hands and knees, after the expenditure of magic, gasping for breath. Red and black spots appear before his eyes, and there's a strange pain in his left arm. As it gets harder to breathe, the world starts to grow dim and sounds start to fade out of existence. Faenor's breathing, to him at least, is preternaturally loud. He can feel his heart pumping faster and faster, as his breathing increases. Gradually everything returns to normal, but when Faenor tries to summon fire in an upturned Palm it sparks and fizzles, before fading. He closes his fist in frustration, then stands only to fall again. This time he closes his eyes, and passes into darkness.

(My character, after that type and amount of power, has just suffered a mild heart attack. It happens every time he uses elemental magic, proportionate to the amount used. Don't worry, he's only unconscious.)