Board Thread:Custom Lore Development/@comment-25344655-20160525185438/@comment-26863727-20160528161448

Maltalidenta Kwuitidherali wrote:

Tybereous wrote: Look, Heart, stay the fuck away from my faction. I won't fall victim to your lore-strict ways like some others have. Honestly. It's part of my lore, and it directly contradicts nothing. I've been very careful about that. If you have a problem, you honestly can't do anything about it. My faction is balanced, awesome, and still at least does not contradict the lore, if it's not entirely lore friendly. Unlike Italle(Spelled correctly? Sorry if I got it wrong.), IMO. I'm not being "lore-strict" here. I'm merely stating that reality will give you a nice hit when you finally factor it in. "Balanced"? Not at all. "Awesome"? Up to debate. "Does not contradict lore"? It actually does, but that's not the point of this. Few things remained in the depths of Utumno, as it is stated, but they were leaderless - and would've never emerged. Broken, primitive, creatures. If I have a problem with the aforementioned, of course I can do something about it. As I am now, I'm voicing my unhappiness. At least factor in realism, and not just "it's mine so I can do what I want", because Utumno was utterly broken, and that which wasn't was obviously hardly worth a mention, or the Valar would've revisited it and broken it again. It would hardly pose a threat to the world like it did last time. Melkor wasn't there to give them a challenge, nor to cause western Endorë to sink. Let's examine your faction, Heart.

Balanced: 15,000 troops consisting of 5,000 rank 3s, 3,000 rank 5s, 4,500 rank 6s, 2,300 rank 7s, 60 rank 9, 12 rank 12s, 1 rank 14, and one rank 15/16. If they have a force like this Avari must be total fuckwads to have not helped out during the War of the Ring. Failed.

Awesome: Yay, a nation of stubborn jackasses who claim to be superior to everyone they encounter who isn't one of them. At least Atmorans respect a worthy opponent. Failed from my viewpoint.

Does not contradict lore: Failed. The Avari are supposed to be a bunch of scattered and hiding groups.