Board Thread:Fan Fiction/@comment-26535281-20160911012943/@comment-26535281-20160911174531

Patrick.vtap wrote: Dark dwarves 2 wrote: Patrick.vtap wrote: Dark dwarves 2 wrote: Good.

Bad.

Stop Writing in general. I'm going to be scathingly honest.

The plot was great, you just need better grammar/clearer writing style. got it. I want to tell you how much I liked the plot. But just basic grammar/punctuation/clarity issues. I would reccomend putting it through a spell-checker after proofreading it. Alright.