Thread:Patrick.vtap/@comment-26254192-20160411023514

I made some changes nothing major and you may not notice if you just skimmed it.

Almanbir is the southern jewel in Ambarona a great fortress yet a place of culture and wealth. The grand city-state is situated as the mouth of the fertile lands in Harad controlling trade such as silks, gold, fish, and slaves... A smaller place with only a single city but is littered with villages and towns that capture local tribes and send them to there great Capitol city of Almanbir (duh). The city itself is a great feat of technology with the city filled with wealth. The city itself is divided into 6 sections with the very center being one of the greatest fortresses in Harad. Built by the people of Numenor is is made of the local yellow stone but shined and polished so it gleams in the light but there being burns and scratches on the walls shows it's had hardships in the past. After Numenor fell and the world changed the people of the city had no idea what to do and the declined and raiders from natives began more and more frequent. They rose up though and drove them back building houses and then building a wall around the houses. And the did it again over and over to what it is now. The fortress itself is only accessible by a single stone road going up 20 feet to reach a solid iron gate. That is if you can even reach the citadel. The city is in 5 sections. The farther out you go the poorer it gets but the walls are tall with gates and hundereds of guards on each wall.

Part one is ready I will have more later. 