Board Thread:Fan Fiction/@comment-26295802-20160614010310/@comment-26044791-20160614071757

The Lord of Minas Morgul wrote: Numerical error: One down, nine to go. It should be one down, eight to go.

How is Baranor the first Nazgûl? He obviously isn't the Witch-king, the most powerful of them all, and their leader. Nor is he Khamûl...

To be fairly honest, I like the concept of the story, along with the story itself, but I feel like it gets choppy at times. It doesn't flow very well, especially towards the end.

He was just the first to be turned, doesn't give him any power or superiority.