Board Thread:Custom Lore Development/@comment-25356210-20160316023355/@comment-25356210-20160317042432

I'm so tired. This is just what I have right now, and is subject to much change:

The Mahaal (mah ha al) (servants of the unseen one) aka "The Confederation"

The Mahaal began at a large desert planet long, long ago. Their religion started when they only used stones and sticks as weapons; but over the ages, they have been hunted for their religion they hold so dear. They would die for it; all of them. After a long war, which stretched over whole planets, and over countless years of technological advances, The Mahaal were through with being hunted; they started their conquest of their Galaxy, and destroyed all the factions opposing them; factions who were far more powerful. They had conquered their Galaxy, and were beginning onto others; on the endless fight to ensure the safety of their religion and culture.

The Mahaal consist of three races:

Jackhalai (Jak Hal I)

The most mysterious race of The Mahaal. These bipedal humanoids are some of the most intelligent humanoids around. Their strange appearance looks like it is out of a pyramid from Egypt; having the appearance of a "Jackal." This race mainly serves as commanders, Ordinators, and advisors.

Ra-basilisk

The Ra-basilisk are by far the best troops of the Confederacy; being an average of over six feet tall; with animalistic legs, slightly hunched backs, and raptor like heads, this race is capable of thirty foot jumps, forty mile per hour running speeds, and feats of incredible strength; without armour.

Humans

The most common humanoid species around. Humans are sturdy Warriors, and but fill just about any other position, being good all around.

Technology and weapons consists of reactive shells that are far more powerful than gunpowder. These shells power ships, rifles, tanks, rail guns, suits, and just about everything; including small portals; which are only big enough to transport small vehicles and ground troops. These portals are most commonly rings... One tank has been widely accepted; the reaper. This vehicle stands on four large legs, with a turret on top, as well as a few anti foot soldier weapons. Their Air Force; unfortunately, is lacking; having no common based air ship. However, their space fleets are mighty; consisting of great sized ships accompanied by smaller escorts.

A few pictures of their style:















This gives the general style. Thoughts? Comments?