Board Thread:Custom Lore Development/@comment-25344655-20160210175432

During the war of wrath, many heroes are sung, from Finarfin to Thorondor, and of villans cast down like the mighty Ancalagon the Black. But what most like to forget of a more hidden battle, but no less deadly. When the hosts of the Union met the hoards of Morgoth in battle over a large crevice in the earth, carved out by the war itself. They forget heroes such as Galahudrion the brave and Elgorath Stonehand. When the banners of silver and light met the banners of dark and decay,

On the battle of the rift...

Should i do more? Or is it terrible. I need to know before i continue. 