User blog comment:Eureka Enderborn/Jaukoehai Ironskin, defender of the defenseless/@comment-25356210-20160119193503

First off, let me tell you, that's really good. You could be the next Wargames maker. :P

Anyway, I would work on the names. Fayday Forest, Crushbone Clan, Maywong Mistmoor, and The Halflings. One of them is a direct copy, some of them rhyme too much, and the rest have too much alliteration.

Anyway, again, great writing and creativity, even if some of it is copied.