I'd just like to see what you guys think.
Michael is a "hanging in there" optimistic scavenger who lives in a hit on the overgrown Great Plains of America. His life is mostly just chasing theives for bounties and hitting on some girl at the local tavern.
But when he comes home to see his hut on fire, He frantically wants to find the man who did this. His only lead: a torn piece of cloth covered in sand. This leads him to the Sahara desert, where he confronts Scorr, an organization of the ancestors of those who stayed during the Exodus. They eventually find it it belonged to a man named Siruss, who recently left their organization to Aratia, a forested planet that resembles the Redwood forest. Michael flies to the planet, only to have his Starfighter get shot down by Kavanyan scouts. He meets up with two NHJR soldiers on the ground who survived a crash of their carrier. Together they reach a native village just as it starts to rain. (This will be elaborated and their struggle will make for a painful death later on, their names are Shiela and Flynn, Flynn dies)
It tens out Siruss was waiting for him at the village. It turns out Siruss was Josh Niklson, his old partner in bounty hunting. After an eexchange of words, Siruss shoots one of the two soldiers, the other one runs. They pull out electric swords and have a swordfight for a while until it ends with Siruss' electro sword being dropped into a hut, sparking a fire throughout the village. Michael ends up blinding Siruss and casting him into the fire, and Sheila and him steal his red ship, the dusk, and make their escape.
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